Creepypasta review: Sally/Play With MeWARNING WHAT YOU'RE ABOUT TO HEAR IS A 100 PERCENT OF MY OPINIONCreepypasta review: Sally/Play With Me by beybladelover15
This story..... offends me.
This story takes a serious and sensitive subject and uses it as a plot device. If you didn't know, the story's main character, Sally was raped by her uncle at the age of 6. Why was this man motivated to rape Sally? This enrages me. Because it uses this terrible subject that people unfortunately have to go through and the author thought it was ok to use rape as a shock factor? Disgusting.
However, this 'shock factor' was also used in Clockwork: Your Time is Up. This enraged me. Just like Sally, rape is used nothing more than an freak'n plot device, nothing else that is f*cked up. You take this real, traumatizing subject that millions of people unfortunately have to go through in their lives, and you exploit it simply there just for shock. Absolutely repugnant. I'm sorry I just can't get over it.
Besides, it could've easily been taken out of the story as her uncle just kills
Creepypasta reveiw: Jeff the KillerI know every single fan girl will kill me for this.Creepypasta reveiw: Jeff the Killer by beybladelover15
This story this fucking story has to be the worst thing made by a human bieng well, other than whoever invted "Anaconda" ughhh....
So, here we go! Review of Jeff the KIller!
This story is soooooo freak'n bad, holy shit, it makes the fuck'n Tails Doll like a master piece. My god. Holy shit. WHO wrote this? This pile of bull shit. this story is a wasted, badly written, so overloved, overhyped, so unrealistic, I can't even stand it. I tell all of you fan girls that when I first read this story, I almost broke my tablet. I shit you not.
Now if anyone had the balls to call this story good, you have never read a brilliant novel before, have you?
The story centers around a 13- year old boy named Jeff. To sum the story up without the all the horse shit, Jeff goes psyhopathic, kills his family, and starts killng inocent people without no good reason. Why did he kill his brother even though he wanted to defend him, why did his skin turn white?
The Interview: Eyeless JackThe Interview: Eyeless Jack by IvyDarkRose
Alan looks over the questions he received through his E-mail; After reviewing the questions, he presses the print button. Soon as the papers finish, he hears someone knock on the door to his office. "Sir! We have the interview room prepped." The guard reports, saluting as he steps in. "Good, So are we even sure this man-like creature can speak?" Alan asks, gathering the papers up.
"Yes, sir. The medical examination showed that he has vocal cords, and the ability of human speech." The guard explains, Alan nods. Alan the walks out towards the interview room."He's fully immobilized, correct? I don't want a repeat of the November incident Took forever to clean up that mess." Alan questions, lifting a eyebrow. "Yes, sir. I was also instructed to search your person,.. to make sure there is no mishaps." The guard says, both of them stopping next to the door.
Alan quickly goes through the pat down procedures, then removes any metal on him. Alan exhales, feeling pretty calm as turns the door kn
Smexy is a bad influenceSmexy is a bad influence by IvyDarkRose
"Hey Sin! Can you grab the measuring cups?!" Splendor yells, mixing the cake batter up. Sin nods, and uses his invisible appendages to reach for them then tosses it to Splendor; "Gezz! that almost hit me, could you please warn me before you throw it?!" Splendor protest, stopping what he was doing. "Sure, sorry brother…OH! Can I borrow your belt today?" Sin says, jumping off the seat he was sitting on. "Umm well last time you took something of mine you cut it up….." Splendor replies meekly. Sin opens his mouth to protest but is interrupted with a rose in his face.
"Morning….want one?" Smexy purrs, Sin just shakes his head and backs up. "Nah you know me…I'mmm…… uuhhh…. allergic to roses…." Sin stutters, raising his hands up in surrender. " AND you know my roses don't cause a allergic reaction….Come on, you always take everything else…why not take a rose?" Smexy protests farther, holding up the rose closer
Dollhouse (Prologue)Once upon a time, there was a doll named Hephannea.Dollhouse (Prologue) by AesumEnergySCREEE
Hephannea lived in a nice small dollhouse in the toy closet.
No other doll ever liked her, and no human played with her.
One day, a princess named Molly opened the closet and saw Hephannea.
She played with the doll all day, and Hephannea was delighted. She never wanted this to end, all she wanted was to be played with- forever.
But of course, Hep
Creepypasta RP characters neededso i have started yet another creepypasta roleplay and we are in need of some more characters.Creepypasta RP characters needed by pjthebest12
age limit 14-25
characters that are already taken and who they are taken by
I myself is of course jeff the killer
Ben Drowned :iconcybertoni:
Play Time :iconeve-of-halloween:
smile dog :iconmessismile:
Eyeless Jack :icondeaththekidfan229:
Homocidal Liu :nomnoms47:
slenderman (cant get your icon to work) ~deidaraxmikey~
characters that are needed
Grinny The Cat
Play timeXJeff the killer
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